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It's happened again! Little help @Jaybird?

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This kind of reminds me of the old sayings like "strike while the iron is hot" or "make hay while the sun shines" or whatever...

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This kind of reminds me of the old sayings like "strike while the iron is hot" or "make hay while the sun shines" or whatever...

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This kind of reminds me of the old sayings like "strike while the iron is hot" or "make hay while the sun shines" or whatever...

This kind of reminds me of the old sayings like "strike while the iron is hot" or "make hay while the sun shines" or whatever...

Also, could you tell me where I can change for the better?

I try doing that, but it doesn't show in the published version... So I just gave up and wrote that comment down to whoever bothers to read it.

Please put a break every four lines, indicating the end of the stanza

Ahahahahahaha what 7 times %uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02

Oh, dear. I seemed to have posted it twice... I really need to start using this website on PC...

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Oh, dear. I seemed to have posted it twice... I really need to start using this website on PC...

I do, however, feel that the syllable count needs work, what do you think about that?

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What took you so long to put this up??? You're almost 3 years late. I take this to heart cause I was a friendless kid in middle school (all my ...

Hi Thea! Thank you so much for your suggestions, I'll try to work on my rhyme scheme more. In my opinion, though, the rhyme scheme is consistent, I meant to ...

I'll take this review to heart, but sorry about your points, heh!